great story

I struggled with whether to give this book 3 or 4 stars. As you can see I ended up giving it 4 and that’s because I absolutely loved the story. The essence of the story keeps you hooked throughout and definitely leaves you wanting more, especially with that cliffhanger at the end!!

The thing I struggled with the most is that it just needs a really good edit. The book could have easily been about 50 pages shorter if it was edited better, there was so so much repetition and so much info that we just didn’t need. We could have done with more world building instead. There was also an awful lot spelling and grammar mistakes and try as I might they just really pull me out of the story.

I would still love to read book 2 though!